Xanthos ([info]quakewithfear) wrote,
@ 2006-10-16 02:55:00
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Entry tags:dark month, fifteen, kingdom hearts, namine, replica riku, replica/namine

[Halloween Fics] - FIFTEEN
Kacfrog711 is awesome and allowed me to borrow her "dark" fandom month. 

Title:  Fifteen
Author:  Xanthos Samurai aka Quakewithfear
Fandom:  Kingdom Hearts: Chain of Memories
Pairing/Characters:  Replica Riku/Namine
Rating:  PG
Length:  652 Words
Warnings:  Spoilers for CoM, spoilers for KHII, a little violence.
Disclaimer:  Not mine.  Don't sue.
Notes:  I love this pairing.  I think there needs to be a lot more of it.  It's so canon and adorable and full of dark, angtsy potential.  ^^:; Yes, I know.  I do like het on occasion. 

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[FIFTEEN]

            Castle Oblivion wasn’t a place fit to be inhabited by a young girl, even one who was a witch and a Nobody.  Amidst the scheming and betrayal and evil that occurred there, Namine remained as still as early-morning dew as the crux and apex of Organization XII’s plans.  They kept her in the center of the castle, subject to their whims and petty torments. 

            There was one part of Namine’s un-life that broke through the dark and uncertainty.  The Riku Replica came to Namine each day, no matter what sinister task the members of the Organization forced upon him.  Even though he spoke little and she even less, the two of them were content to be together and silent as long as they were together. 

            Replica was the only person in the entire castle who considered Namine as anything more than a weapon or something to be remembered idly at the last moment.  He cared for her.  He watched over her.  He saw her as a person.  Namine knew that Replica was ignorant of the truth – that neither of them were actually people.  She wanted to spare him the pain of that knowledge for as long as she could, just as she wished someone could have spared her.

            “Namine.”  Riku would walk into the room where they kept her.  His step was soft, but not like the step of man who sought to hide.  It was the step of a man who possessed quiet, insurmountable confidence.  He didn’t need to pound down the halls like Axel or Xigbar, who stomped as if they were trying to prove a point.  

            “Hello, Riku.”  Namine would smile up at him as he walked towards her desk in the center of the room.  He’d walk over and stand behind her.

            “What are you working on today, Namine?”  He would ask. 

            “I’m drawing us like we used to be.  Do you remember this?”  Namine would hold up a drawing and show him.  It would be of many different things.  Sometimes a beach, sometimes a cave, sometimes a raft sitting in the sand. 

            Replica would frown down at the drawing for a moment, then smooth his face.  He wouldn’t want her to know that he didn’t remember any of it. 

            “Yeah, there’s our beach,” he would say.  “And there’s the raft.  Do you remember when we sailed it?  That was lots of fun, wasn’t it, Namine?”

            Namine would get a sad look in her eyes and turn away.  He wouldn’t remember…

            On this day, however, Namine was concerned.  Replica was late and he was never late.  Not to meet her. 

            Every step that fell in the hallway outside made Namine straighten in her seat, hoping that he would walk in.  An hour passed, then another and there was still no sign of Replica.  Namine got increasingly anxious, her fingers stilling on her drawings. 

            Finally, the door creaked slowly open and Namine looked up, bright and hopeful.  Then, with in a few seconds, her face fell and became full of worry.  Replica stood in the doorway, his armor ripped and mangled and covered in blood.  Red smeared his silver hair and pale skin and dripped from his fingertips and hair onto the floor. 

            “Riku…”  Namine began to rise, but the Replica shook his head.

            “No…  It’s okay…”  He walked in slowly, a trial of blood in his wake.  Namine slowly sank into her chair, watching him. 

            Each step was agonizing and slow, but he pressed forward.  When he reached her table, he sank down to his knees and crawled to her side. 

            “Nami… ne…”  He laid his head in her lap, the picture of submission.  Blood seeped into her white dress, but she didn’t care.  Namine took Replica’s head in her arms and held it gently.

            “I’m here, Riku…”  She stroked his silver-red hair with her delicate hands.  “I’m here…  It’ll be okay…”

            He closed his eyes and surrendered. 

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[info]kacfrog711
2006-10-28 05:31 am UTC (link)
awwww. <3 I adored that. I love the mood you set up, and I love your explaination for all of the nuances - like the soft footfalls, and how you present Namine the way she seemed in CoM - quiet and sad, but no desperate (did she get a whole lot happier in KH2, or am I just not remembering CoM tyhat accurately? >>;). I loved the tension you built up, too, with Riku not showing up. And then when he did.... you created such a gorgeous scene. <3<3 The blood on the white, and Riku collapsing into Namine like a knight on his queen. just gorgeous. <3<3 I even get use my favorite saying - tragically pretty. <3<3<3

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[info]quakewithfear
2006-10-31 03:56 pm UTC (link)
Replica/Namine does not get enough fandom love, in my opinion. And yet it's TOTALLY PLAUSIBLE. And just plain adorable. I like them best as a tragic couple because they ARE tragic. Replica believes in Namine so blindly and she doesn't want to hurt him by revealing the truth, so... it's a sad relationship.

...Whoa, I wish I had an excuse to actually write Namine as a queen and Replica as her knight. T_T I love the way you phrased that.

^^ I'm glad you liked this. It makes me feel less silly about writing het once in a while.

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[info]muffinsphinx
2009-01-03 09:54 am UTC (link)
Pfff... Replica/Namine is not just plausible, it's thiiiiiiiiiis close to being canon.
The mood is very well-done... and the description. So pretty much everything about the fic, really. :D

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[info]quakewithfear
2009-01-03 04:58 pm UTC (link)
It IS! It is SO CLOSE to being canon! I consider it canon anyways because they are so wonderful and brilliant and delicious.

Thank you for reading! I'm SO PLEASED to still get comments on this even years later - it's really awesome!

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[info]muffinsphinx
2009-01-03 05:25 pm UTC (link)
Haha... I stumbled upon the story from a link someone made on deviantART.
Well, it IS canon that Repliku was in love with Namine... and she MUST have had feelings for him back, based on how she acted... so. Canon. >:3

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[info]rah_bop
2006-10-31 10:26 pm UTC (link)


I was going to say "wow, I can't believe nobody has commented on this," but leave it to katie to sneak in here in the couple days it took me to draw that. :x But I really was suprised. this fic is GORGEOUS and full of such beautiful imagery. I love your writing style; it's delicious. (And inspiring. ♥♥♥)

I didn't plan to get this finished on halloween, but it worked out nicely that way, i guess. ♥ HAPPY HALLOWEEN. ♥

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[info]rah_bop
2006-10-31 10:37 pm UTC (link)
oh yeah, p.s. Replica only appears in castle oblivion, and castle oblivion doesn't have desks. :x in case you were wondering.

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[info]quakewithfear
2006-11-01 01:18 am UTC (link)
...I just about fell over when I scrolled down and saw that. I mean it. The mental image of the scene was so clear in my head while I wrote it and you managed to capture the feel that I was going for perfectly. And it's SO BEAUTIFUL. The blood and the poses and the reflections and GUH.

*just keeps staring in awe*

You're amazing. Thank you SO much for this! ^^;; If I ever get over my "ZOMGSQUEE!" I'll try to write you a better comment and/or a thank-you fic. ^^;; It's the least I can do.

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[info]rah_bop
2006-11-01 02:32 am UTC (link)
X3; you don't have to do anything. Consider it thanks for writing (and making available) such a pretty fic. ♥

Is it okay if I post this somewhere, like dA or LJ?

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[info]quakewithfear
2006-11-01 03:57 am UTC (link)
Post away! ^_^ I'd be flattered if you wanna show it off. Also, if you wanna post a link back to here in case people are wondering where it came from, I'd love that. ^_^

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[info]rah_bop
2006-11-01 11:50 am UTC (link)
But of course. That goes without saying. I feel like this is more yours than mine, anyway. X3

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[info]shugamri
2006-12-02 08:51 am UTC (link)
I found this via rah_bop's link on the illustration.

Out of all the secondary characters, Riku Replica is probably my favorite out of all of them. Reading this, I feel like he's just been beaten by Riku, yet before he gave in and died, he strugggled to return to Namine to say goodbye.

Beautiful, absolutely beautiful.

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[info]quakewithfear
2006-12-05 04:31 pm UTC (link)
Thank you very much for coming to read this! Honestly, I think Rah's art captured the scene better than my words did, but I'm flattered and honored that I could inspire her.

Replica and Namine are two of my favorite people in the entire series of games. I wanted so badly for them to be happy, but I think that it's ultimately impossible.

Thank you again for commenting! (Sorry the reply was so late...)

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[info]cangzi
2006-12-21 07:35 am UTC (link)
Also found my way here thanks to Rah's art. I am so glad I found this. It's tragic, but so very beautiful >.< And Rah really captured the mood well, lovely work!

*glomps both of you*
Please do write more!!! Will bribing you with cookies help?

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[info]quakewithfear
2006-12-21 07:50 am UTC (link)
Isn't Rah amazing? *gnaws on the artist-type* I'm just glad that she likes my writing enough to occasionally toss me fanart!

Thank you so much for coming and reading this as well! ^_^ It's so encouraging when people leave nice comments.

*grin* Cookies are ALWAYS an acceptable bribe.

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(Anonymous)
2007-01-01 01:28 am UTC (link)
I'm having a seizure right now due to an overdose of UBER AWESOMENESS!!!

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[info]cotume
2008-01-18 10:07 pm UTC (link)
... I just came back to this a second time and damn. It's every bit as good as I remember. Your words and Rah's picture just fit together so beautifully... has me in tears every single time.
(Gawd, where's my paper? I needs to draw some Repliku/Namine now)

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[info]quakewithfear
2008-07-01 06:44 am UTC (link)
(I'm sorry this comment is.... five months late. >_< I'm usually much better about replying promptly.)

Thank you very much for the comment! I'm especially flattered that you took the time to come back and read it again!

Yes to drawing! It's such a lovely pairing and always needs more love.

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[info]rainonparade
2008-07-01 06:11 am UTC (link)
Darling, you have me in tears. I love Repliku/Nami, it so tragically sweet. Their doomed romance calls to me, much like AkuRoku.

Your writing is wonderful. So full of emotion, even in that short fic.

I love this enough to keep trying to comment, even though my computer has wonked out at least three times while typing this.

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[info]quakewithfear
2008-07-01 06:43 am UTC (link)
Mmm.... Thank you very much for the comment.

This is one of my favorite works because even though it's almost two years old, I still get people saying how touched they are by it.

I especially appreciate it that you commented even despite your computer problems! Best of luck and thank you again!

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